This litany poem is in response to the One Shoot Sunday poetry challenge hosted by One Stop Poetry. The photograph linked to in the title and to which the poem responds was taken by Fee Easton.
As always, feedback welcome.
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To the Ashen Woman—
To part your ashen
veil—
To slip into the eyes
you wear like a plea,
the eyes your soul
palms like the pair of
cast-off rosary beads
the coroner found
clenched in your fist
of a death and slapped
into your skull to fill out
the lids—
To spoon into the hollow
of your grave—
To bathe in the ash from
your soul's holocaust—
To sift for the arsonist's
smoldering joint—
To settle like seed into
elegy—
To wait for new fertility
to rend the ashen veil—
To slip into your eyes like
a plea—
like cast off rosary beads...i like that...great stir of the emotions with this one...nicely played against the prompt...
ReplyDeleteA great verse straight from the heart.. I loved it.
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Om Shanti Om
May peace be… pray for People of Japan
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Excellent, perfect, great flow.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Fee, Brian, Sashi, and Steve. I'm glad you stopped by.
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