tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post8594223584267681608..comments2024-03-14T01:11:49.757-06:00Comments on chasing the long white cloud: Rain (Poem): RevisitedTylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-46734806721177282172009-10-05T19:39:23.881-06:002009-10-05T19:39:23.881-06:00I think I like that version of the song better. It...I think I like that version of the song better. It captures the sentiment so well.<br /><br />And I like that word: ambivalence. Though I don't particularly like experiencing it every night when I put my kids to bed and realize that I could be better and that they're going to grow up no matter what I do...so I'd better do it right (but I do it wrong so well). Argh. <br /><br />More Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-3099213651390780692009-10-02T12:40:51.588-06:002009-10-02T12:40:51.588-06:00Excellent stanza breaks, and you capture so simply...Excellent stanza breaks, and you capture so simply yet vividly that ambivalence we feel as parents. <br /><br />It also reminded me of how my 5-year-old still insists that the lyric to the other rain song goes, "It's raining, it's boring."Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.com