tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post5677786131819982225..comments2024-03-14T01:11:49.757-06:00Comments on chasing the long white cloud: After Winter Nursing (Poem)Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-40058988721334051072009-11-18T03:30:40.606-07:002009-11-18T03:30:40.606-07:00As always, you have created phrases that I covet, ...As always, you have created phrases that I covet, "warm as the rest between breaths" and "stars like purled bodies" being just two examples. Lovely, intimate, cozy (with none of the negative connotations of that last).<br /><br />I wish for periods. The stanza breaks are not enough to signal a mental breath for me.Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-64640056015010342492009-11-16T23:30:11.635-07:002009-11-16T23:30:11.635-07:00.
Oops. Sorry.
That was me..<br /><br />Oops. Sorry.<br /><br />That was me.Th.http://thmazing.blogspot.com/2007/08/all-work-and-no-play.htmlnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-41782053776715627062009-11-16T23:29:12.235-07:002009-11-16T23:29:12.235-07:00.
This is a hard poem to access for the simple re....<br /><br />This is a hard poem to access for the simple reason that first-person accounts filled with nipple-filled mouths are not generally like <i>this</i> one, if you know what I mean. And I'm finding that surprisingly hard to get past.Lady Steedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12439183959591664777noreply@blogger.com