tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post1777071887377708053..comments2024-03-14T01:11:49.757-06:00Comments on chasing the long white cloud: The Big Three-oh (Plus a Revision)Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-57730140237575650162009-12-07T20:02:40.740-07:002009-12-07T20:02:40.740-07:00I did see it. And thanks, for both the birthday wi...I did see it. And thanks, for both the birthday wishes and the impetus to revise.Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-53753066797827736442009-12-07T07:27:44.213-07:002009-12-07T07:27:44.213-07:00I left you a message on Facebook regarding this; d...I left you a message on Facebook regarding this; don't know whether you saw it. <br /><br />I love the revision. The punctuation breaks your lovely imagery into chunks that my brain can digest one by one. It works better for me now.<br /><br />I hope you had a terrific birthday!Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.com