tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post1336241510341992880..comments2024-03-14T01:11:49.757-06:00Comments on chasing the long white cloud: Triptych for My Twenty-Third Year (Poem)Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-13442127395364980542009-07-17T15:26:15.385-06:002009-07-17T15:26:15.385-06:00Gotcha.Gotcha.Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-62192096808983421542009-07-17T10:40:16.979-06:002009-07-17T10:40:16.979-06:00I think it's a gross word. It reminds me of g...I think it's a gross word. It reminds me of gross things and icks me out a bit.Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-54364240979529539982009-07-17T10:17:51.055-06:002009-07-17T10:17:51.055-06:00Wow, Luisa. Maturity's not something I (or tho...Wow, Luisa. Maturity's not something I (or those closest to me, esp. my wife) usually associate with me. ;) Thanks for the compliment.<br /><br />And, if you don't mind: what do you mean by "infelicitous"?Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-50128371533140045662009-07-17T08:33:11.829-06:002009-07-17T08:33:11.829-06:00The cadences lilt, the images glow. Your maturity...The cadences lilt, the images glow. Your maturity is striking in general and rather preternatural in particular with this triptych.<br /><br />Two things (neither criticisms nor suggestions for change): <br /><br />I find the word "slit" infelicitous. But perhaps that's a good thing.<br /><br />Your impressions of birthing are everything that mine are not: crystalline, apart, Luisa Perkinshttp://kashkawan.squarespace.comnoreply@blogger.com