tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post1150415658615028032..comments2024-03-14T01:11:49.757-06:00Comments on chasing the long white cloud: A Thing Like Death (Poem)Tylerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-10994365644961333792009-06-26T22:41:26.425-06:002009-06-26T22:41:26.425-06:00"Gorgeous" is good feedcrack, Luisa. Tha..."Gorgeous" is good feedcrack, Luisa. Thanks.<br /><br />And I hadn't thought of the Eden allusions, but now that you mention it, they're right there: girl, boy, serpent, something like a tree (I guess a rose is close, right?). Thanks for pointing that out because you helped me see my own poem in a new light.<br /><br />As for <i>Me lovey J. Kirk Richards</i>: we should start a Tylerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08502527563795165435noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4800938683262569469.post-75833377567053390732009-06-26T11:33:58.726-06:002009-06-26T11:33:58.726-06:00Well, that was gorgeous.
I love the subtle Eden...Well, that was gorgeous. <br /><br />I love the subtle Eden allusions; the whole piece is at once melancholic and erotic. <br /><br />Me lovey J. Kirk Richards.Luisa Perkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15310698422276446909noreply@blogger.com